You should have seen the mid-air free-fall sword fights and jousts that took place in sub-orbital airspace with critters screaming hot-blooded battle-cries and exchanging blows that lit up the sky and shake buildings with the intensity of the vibrations.
Not only does the drawing itself look cool, but it has that certain indescribable feel that draws me to certain drawings.
It looks and sounds like you've got a great, creative story concept so far from what I gather from your description and comments to others on this deviation. Keep up the good work, and don't let unmotivation keep you down. Lack of energy is very difficult to overcome, but bringing such a concept to life is worth every bit of effort spent in making it.